homeless (haiku/senryu)
a high-pitched sirenI never pay attentionbut the noise stops nearreticent neonreflected across facesthe reaper finds me WFS 2003"Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't." Hamlet. II, ii.
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These are very well done!! love the ending on both, powerful indeed!
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WOW!Superb use of brevity - the impact is fantastic: so much suggested, a whole story, in these few lines."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs has always...
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good show, dog.achieving a narrative that is truly 5/7/5 andnot just a chopped and channelled 17 is hard to do.i know.i've tried.carry on.oh yeah...BEN RISHON here ... ezboard won't let me log in, so...
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Thanks, Everyone for reading.On this day of remembrance,there are so many,who go unremembered.CB "Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't." Hamlet. II, ii.
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Billy, these verses struck me deeply. I applaud your message and talent. Thespianna
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Thanks so much, TJThough it is I who should applaude you.CB "Though this be madness, yet there is method in 't." Hamlet. II, ii.
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